What do u think of this poem?

honest opnions aprreciated. i like to think of as my punk version of pretty fly~~~





so i rode my sk8board





to get some spray cans





i even wore my wide tongues shoes





the off brand of VANS





OMFG today pple at skewl called me a POSER!!!





but hey what do they know





i mean just like that one Good charlotte song said...





im jsut being myself





which means im two times better than every1 else





so im wearing my big thick black studded belt





and i've decided to write an emo song about the way i felt...





Pop-punk-rock





isn't a music,





it's just a trend...





It's doesn't bother me if you like it...





It bothers me when you just pretend





It's not really kwl





when it's all fake-





so take off all those goth clothes





for your parents sake





~Now I'm not tryin' to act like some





genre expert,





but as much as i'm agaiagainst labels





...here's a lil exception...





(((((( POSER ALERT- POSER ALERT!!!!! ))))))

What do u think of this poem?
its nice and i agree with what your trying 2 say





i like the thing u say about trends cause i kno so many ppl who r against stuff like tht
Reply:i think its cool.





you've got talent and i agree with your poem
Reply:LIKE IT BETTER IF IT RIMD TYPO
Reply:excellent
Reply:First of all you aren't using realy words. Second of all it sucks.
Reply:ummmm i don't really understand it
Reply:whatever...
Reply:ok
Reply:Ever read teenage poetry? It's that bad.
Reply:i like it. its cool



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